by regularguy13
Great story! I loved it!! You're probably going to get a lot of flack re your category choice. Ignore the haters. Five stars and a favorite point!
Great story. Loved how you started it.
Awesome setup. Glad she didn't just go to college and become a cumbucket like she said in the story. This was sweet and sexy. Nice job.
Great premise, fun story, but could have used more engagement and feelings--both physical and emotional. Felt it came off a bit clinical, like a summary description of events; would have loved it more with deeper exploration of feelings and emotions, arousal, that really draws you in to the moments. I look forward to reading more from you!
You said that there would be all this sex. Just saying then I gave him a bj or he stuck his dick in me. That's not erotic literature imo sorry.
Interesting to read the comments by RedRory and Newt, I gave the story five stars. It wasn't what I was expecting from the title but I enjoyed it and plan to read more of regularguy's stuff.
Again only four stars, you need much more detail in the sex acts themselves. Read a couple chapters from my niece Rindi series to see what I mean about details.