by melbclayman
Dear Author, This was an excellent love story filled with great characterizations and a
very fine plot. Well written but unfortunately, not completed. Why have you ceased production on Literotica? Unfortunate! Thank you for the read and for the trip you took me on. A strong five! jntiques
Enjoyed the general story and the characters as much if not more than the erotic portion.
Great job, looking forward to chapter 2.
Well-written. Will have a few quibbles via "Send Feedback," but a fine effort.
What finely drawn characters.You really brought them to life on the page, in creating a story that was believable and enjoyable. Well done!
You have the marvelous ability to make the story take on a life. I really enjoyed reading it and hope it will be continued.