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Anonymousover 3 years agoThis story was so good, till the mint moment. Her hurt was real, her reaction was real, but after that you lost me. How can you write such a brilliant scene with real feelings and reactions and then just throw those perfect characters out and replace them with characters that are the average same old boring characters that you can find in many stories. Please do something with this fantastic talent of yours.
Anonymousover 6 years agoDinner was almost crisp because I didn't want to put it down. I wouldn't have been able to endure that much pain but, sure got me excited. Thanks for the great story.
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Lainie666almost 9 years agoMostly loved it, but I'd like to see her forced to call them Sir and much more obedient, not mouthing off.
Anonymousover 9 years agothis story is great but the girl needs to get spanked more! it will make it more interesting! so next time make her get spanked harder and longer,anyway loved this story!
dairetoalmost 11 years agoFantastic!
What a great story, can wait to read the next chapter about Emma and Tag.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoIts called erotica fantasy for a reason. There are women as well as men who are into spanking. Hell, I wish I could get my husband into it. Not just "undesirable" women crave that kind of attention. Sex? This was just getting warmed up. In order to understand any BDSM relationship, one must be open to this kind of thing. Clearly you are not and that's perfectly OK; your opinion is your opinion. However, there is nothing wrong with two consenting adults partaking in this particular kind of foreplay if you will.
Secondly, not ONCE was there any mention of these men being Army DS. If you had read more carefully, you would note they are Marine drill instructors. If you must know, they were once referred to as drill instructors. Common knowledge.
This story will also be stored in my favorites. I wish to read more about Emma and Tag. Delicious. Well done. I must also say the spelling and grammar are used well. Epecially compared to some authors and readers. Again, well done.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoCan you say yuck...were is the sex cause all I saw was torture...It started of good and you fucked it up. I hope your sadistic ass gets smacked by some old geezer and then tell me if you came??? I mean really. Ugh. It's women like you that make men think beating and raping them is some sort of fore play..It's funny sorry for all the men who read this cause I'm sure she is a fat ugly hag...All undesirable woman crave any attention..hot woman fear pain and torture..When they put in torture/beatings that is where this story should go or maybe spanking fetishes ughhh....
Anonymousover 11 years ago@LittleIrishDolly I call BS, there is no way your husband is an Army DI. You'd know that if he was even in the Army... Considering the Army doesn't have DIs but DSs (Drill Sergeants) and more times than not a DS would be offended by someone referring to them as a DI.
curiousgirl1over 11 years agoI so love this story, I found myself laughing, biting my lip/nails, getting excited and just completely loving every bit of this read. Thank you! Very well written!!
