All Comments on 'Boozin' Susan'

You must have read a bunch of stories on this web site before you wrote this tale.

It rambles from one profanity to the next but does not make any connection.

Try writing one just from you own imagination and don't pay any attention to what other writers use.

I loved the whole mental-emotional dynamic of the narrator, from jerking to lookalikes of Susan via porn, to flirting with her at work, to eventually having it heat up in real-time. It was very hot.

I liked that the narrator falls in love with Susan at the end. It seemed as though he was already mostly there, even earlier. I would love to see another chapter involving how this tryst affects the narrator's relationship with Tammy.