All Comments on 'Border Station Five: Dear Diary'

This is set before chapter one and is the chapter 1-2 Interlude.

I’m currently working on the chapter 2 edit/rewrite.

Very interesting prospect you have laid out. Lone man going to a major mystery. Time will tell if my expectations are meet.

What are you expecting?

Wonder what happened to the other candidate

I forgot to mention that Dear Diary is meant to be bad, they are diary entries, who says John knows how to write properly?

Nice prequel to this story and what it took for john to get to take the mission.

Thanks

Can’t wait to read the next twenty or so chapters. I only have one problem with this chapter, It was far too short. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Named chapters are Interludes, they're meant to be short. I aim for 2000 words max.