All Comments on 'Boricuas Ch. 01'

Second installment please!!!

descret and realistic too.

Great start.....looking forward to more.

Yes Looking for more!

That was HOT!

Can hardly wait for chapter 2....

That was very well done and leads on to another couple of chapters at least. The next being his training and then the one after being gicen his cousin and you can probably do another as they move on and continue their lives.... with so many posibilites.

Well done and keep up the great work :)

Everyone should have a mentor to learn the basics.

I look forward to reading the lessons and watching his progress.

Thanks

Five stars and looking forward to the next chapter.

Waiting for the next events for these characters . Mom, daughter, nephew and all the possibilities. Please continue! My imagination is running wild.

First rate. Very well done.

Please

Another stammering, wussy, virgin guy being told what to do kind of story. 1*