All Comments on 'Born to Love Her Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A great start

Looking forward to the next chapter. 5 * Thanks for your time and efforts in writing this story.

Turtle1952Turtle1952over 5 years ago
Fantastic

Love a really good bro/sis romance. I hope to read more soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nicely, nicely!

Really liked it because you made it so damned plain and honest. I believed it because I actually went through a similar situation several decades ago.

3forsexanytime3forsexanytimeover 5 years ago
Great story

I love the story hope to hear more from Born to Love Her, thanks again

prop69prop69over 5 years ago
a very beautiful and exciting story.

A lifetime of love and devotion deemed wrong by society, but right by a man and woman.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

daylilygardenerdaylilygardenerover 5 years ago
Can't Wait

Looking forward to the next chapter. I enjoy that these two are adults. 5 Stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Just what a pure bro/sis love story should be like

It's rare to see some more aged bro/sis couples here and this one sure as hell made it a wonderful experience and produced and itch for future chapters. Nothing but a 5* from me!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Happy campers

Please carry on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Terribly Fast-paced

I just scroll down a paragraph the characters are in their 30's then again scroll down a paragraph they suddenly in relationship with each other.

JerrycuriousJerrycuriousover 5 years ago
Very Hot

Such a good approach to bro/sis incest. The threat of pregnancy makes it even hotter.Can't wait to see additional chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
please write more

this is a very enthralling story

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A Great Story

Spoiled by the crap about the Pill

He should have just pushed is cock in as deep as it would go and shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy

This is story land no VD or babies

GirlWatchinGirlWatchinover 5 years ago
Great story

I really enjoyed this story, to the point that I added it to my Favorites. I'm hoping to see the sequel soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Awesome read.

Encore encore. Can’t wait for chapter 2.

ghost57718ghost57718over 5 years ago
Hot, Hot, Hot

Can't wait for chapter 2!!

dannyboy66109dannyboy66109almost 5 years ago
Awesome read

Great story, can't wait for another chapter.

justme123456789justme123456789almost 5 years ago
nice chapter 2 please

would love to see chapter 2 this story was hot loved it

hope u feel up to writing chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Terrible comparison

Saying the sister is slutty is like saying the sun is dim? The sun is the opposite of dim. So, that would mean the sister is the opposite of slutty.

SilentSoul69SilentSoul69over 3 years agoAuthor

@Anon who posted "Terrible comparison

Saying the sister is slutty is like saying the sun is dim? The sun is the opposite of dim. So, that would mean the sister is the opposite of slutty."

Two things:

1. You posted your comment on the wrong story.

And 2. You misunderstood the passage you're referring to. It's not a comparison. In the story you're referring to (Gothic Persuasion), "Saying my sister is a slut, is like saying the sun is dim" is a statement of obvious fact. OF COURSE the sun is far more brilliant than "dim", therefore to say that the sun is dim is a vast undervaluing of its brilliance, and in conclusion, the sister is being called a slut would be a vast understatement.

I hope that clears that up for you.

Thank you for reading.

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASover 1 year ago

Great story, nice build-up to the coupling; they are a cute couple.

I am quite enjoying reading this. Would like to see you add even more chapters to what you have already written!

Five**5**Stars!

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