All Comments on 'Bottles Ch. 01'

More writing from you is always welcome. Keep working on what you want.

Great start please keep going.

I like the fact that the 3 give different aspects to his personalty, and following journey I think will will be very entertaining.

5 Stars

This was awesome, you nailed it. The humor and eroticism just flowed from the page, I for one would be pleased to see more of this story.

You did an outstanding job with this one. Can I ask who the inspirations were for the three genies? It was mentioned that they were based on famous people, and at least two were pornstars. I ask simply for research purposes. lol

Keep going

Keep it going!

This was very well thought out, written, and presented. Don't stop now!

Hey, something I should've noted in the foreword: we won't be seeing much of Eric's work or his students in this story. Students probably won't be characters at all. He'll break away from teaching pretty quickly.

worth 5*s keep going more,more

I really enjoyed this story of yours. I really enjoyed the humor and all. Well written! I personally would really enjoy reading the continued story of Eric and his genies. I also like that there is one bottle that he can't open now, but what about the future? I'm sure that you have something in mind with the fourth bottle since you put it in the story.

5 stars

At least one more.,..PLEASE

Kydo

Great story

Really good start to a promising story. Keep it going

5 stars please continue.

An amazing opening chapter! Thank you so much for starting this story! I can’t wait for more! Thank you!

Fun stuff. I think it needs some conflict or an obstacle or antagonist to really make it compelling to continue. Right now everything *is* too good to be true. But I want to read about how Eric games the system to help people even when the genies say he shouldn’t.

I enjoyed this story very much. More please, and soon. Thanks.

5 stars please keep this story going

Cannot wait for the next chapter! Love reading stories that combine sex and magic especially when the author presents good characters all combined in a great plot.

Good genie story! Well developed, nice twist on a genie story line please keep going!

Don't stop. 5 Stars

This one was kinda wooden, predictable and redundant. The sex was repetitive.

His choice to open the other bottles was selfish, gluttonous, hubristic and ungrateful.

I know that you are much more imaginative than this.

I want to add my voice to those that are asking for more. I like your other series and am looking to more chapters of each of them as well as this one. Please don’t let this be the last chapter of this one.

The dialogue is organic, the characters are well designed, and those of us who enjoy this genre of fantasy are hoping that you have a long story arc for this! Would love for his ex to see him so happy, and curious to see how he is provided for. Also curious to see who gets the 4th genie...

What a Great start to this tale! You have an excellent grasp of this mystical world. Can't wait to see where you take us. Keep on doing you. JT

This was brilliant. Looking forward to the next part

Next chapter soon please excellent

My only disappointment is that this was not published long ago. Eagerly waiting more!

In the story it is mentioned that the genies are based off porn stars. Is this just for story purposes or did you actually base their designs off of real porn stars. I'm curious.

A spirited beginning. I cannot wait for the next chapter.

The Story is good, pls more of this.

I think it was a Good idea to publish the Story of Eric

I definitely see this as worthy of more chapters.

This story was a lot of fun, and had some neat twists on the whole genie concept. I would love to see some kind of Return of Jafar-esque evil genie in the future!

I am really liking where this is going. I didn't know it until now, but it seems that I have genie fantasies too

I have to say, I love your stories, but I have to get a small criticism out of the way. All of your protagonists are rather passive. The only exception being Evan. None of the MC's seem to work for the gifts they get; it's dropped into their laps. It's not a story-breaking issue, but I hope you address it in your other works.

More chapters. Please

Yes yes yes please make more of this

Have you ID'd the particular pornstars you were thinking of with these three genies?

Awesome

So much for running off at the mouth with questions and answers that I would ask in such an incredible fantasy situation, instead of proceeding rapidly to the mandatory erotica sex scenes. Good job, and more please. Thank you!

Where is the continuation of this story? You have a great story here. Please send more.

Yes. I want to read on. When I first heard of the other bottles Imthought blond, brunet and red head. Maybe you could have them play Cupid with a strawberry blond later.?...

Thorvaldssen says "it needs some conflict or an obstacle or antagonist to really make it compelling to continue."

I disagree. I'm here for the porn, and "Bottles" delivers. You keep writing it, I'll keep reading it.

Wonderful fantasy. Can't wait to read more it would be great to have the ex. see him with other women and not even paying attention to her presence.

Perfect fantasy!!! Please make this an on going series!!!

WOW!

I can’t wait for more

Does he even possess a pair or is Eric actually a sympathetic woman. he is a geek, any and all geeks know what a genie is and what can be done with a genie. Any geek board game will define a genie or a Djinn. But, but, but I don't want to offend you. please please don't call me Master. Really???

fucking seriusly?! you made one of the girls into a whore?! any real man with a brain would not want to fuck a whore. it just ruin the story, you should change that.

Wow loved this first chapter now onwards to the next asap thank you oh and 5* for chapter 1

I see that the most fecent "anonymous" has no idea what a temple prostitute was.

And he's exactly the type of unreasoning sexist jerk that causes a lot of the problems in our current society - more than willing to degrade and belittle women and to read and watch porn but treating the women who satisfy his desires as degraded slots.

Buy a clue, boy.

Hey TonyUSMC3051? You realize that real masters check in with their subs and make sure stuff is ok first, right?

Or are you one of those wannabe doms who demands that every woman who is submissive call you by your self chosen title the first time you talk to her, and then complains that no sub will go out with you?

If you take care of your toys you get to keep them.

You should keep on👍

Great stuff....

Loved it.

Many thanks.

Was kinda hoping that he'd get other types with the other 2, but still was a great starting chapter

@aaror-I llove your shot back at the "Marine" below...sounds like a lot of the ones I served with...lots of testosterone, not lots of thought about how to treat a woman...oh well, leaves us to woo them with OUR prowess.

That Eric has 3 genies who are alike to serve him, and help him learn about himself, and heal his heart from the last female that used him and kicked him to the curb...I am GOOD with this...they are ALL synched, their relationship will be more than multiplied, and symbiotic...looking forward to the next chapter...

Five Stars...🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠

Great start! 5*

I would be happy with one genie but 3? overwhelming fun. I want it please.

Hot and happy wish fulfillment, good stuff.