All Comments on 'Bottom of the Barrel Ideas'

YOU DID A PRETTY GOOD JOB. I GIVE IT FULL SCORE, SINCE YOU'RE NEW TO THE GAME. I DID PICK UP A FEW MISTAKES MISSED WHEN PROOFING. HERE ARE A COUPLE AS AN EXAMPLE:

My mother has long brown hair that was at the moment braided in a complicated fashion (wich) woman just knew how to pull off effortlessly.

stammered now embarrassed for (no)catching on how the afternoon

KEEP ON WRITING! CD

Were you drunk??? Thought I would check out the other stories you wrote since this was not too bad. What a surprise to find you can't even number your four part story in order.

Thank you kindly for the feedback. I really appreciate it and will strive to do better in my future stories. :)

QuillandInk.

There was a mixup, I re-edited chapter three of that story and it somehow replaced the first chapter. Regardless thank you for reading this one. :)

Loved the little surprise...

Thank you for reading, glad you like that part :)