by R_Peterson
new everything in advance nothing new and pretty poor. little dick`?
Click is one of the verbs I'd like to read when you're describing one or both of these lady's shoes making as they
reluctantly stroll towards Todd to fulfill his sexual needs. Ensuing stories will have the girls servicing others?
Oh yes the women get blackmailed into haveing sex with Todd and any body else he wants them to. The husbands find out they divorce the women and then Todd can have them all to himself. Stupid story of stupid people doing stupid things.
It seems like the ladies will be going public. The more humiliating for them the better.
As you'll guess from my comments on chapter one, I'd rather you hadn't decided to go with Todd blackmailing the girls. They obviously love their husbands, and it doesn't seem very likely he'd persuade them to hump each other in front of him, let alone put his cock in their mouths. The mention of a "club" indicates this tale will stray further into fantasyland.