All Comments on 'Boudoir Models Ch. 04'

by R_Peterson

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great end and hopefully begining of another story

Great and surprised ending to an erotic story.

I hope you continue with their fantasises.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
YAWN!

Been done before a thousand times. Well I hope they enjoy their swinging, swapping, nude photoclub. They all deserve each other.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
perfect

they really belong toghether. fucked up friends, cheating wifes, pimps/cucks as husbands. and of course no problem all in the open.

R_PetersonR_Petersonabout 15 years agoAuthor
Feedback for Anonymous…

I usually do not comment on my own stories. But I am unable to respond to this group directly. I need to leave my remarks here.

To all the “Negative Anonymous” comments: THANK YOU!

I had written Todd to be disliked. I was also hoping to get a little help, and you did not disappoint me. Your wonderful negative comments actually helped to vilify Todd even more. The reader emails behind the scene has been incredible. They really hate Todd.

Anonymous, thank you for being your normal predictable negative self.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
!

Glad to be of help.

ErotonautErotonautabout 15 years ago
Guessed as much

Yes, I predicted the husbands might be in on this, which didn't stop me enjoying this chapter in the least. Krista's quasi-rape in the stocks was particularly hot, and handled well (so glad you avoided the cliche of her beginning to enjoy the intrusion).<br>

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So, do you intend taking this further? It seems to have reached a natural conclusion here, but it will presumably depend upon whether you come up with new and exciting games for the girls to play.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
is blackmail

not a crime in the states or is your story saying that they really wanted their family broken up by divorce.

You have them wanting out but not using this opportunity to do so.

I ask because they have a letter (2 copies) that is clearly blackmail and the offence that they committed at the start would not have earned them more than a rebuke in the UK.

A word of warning to any husband foolish enough to try this lark without making sure that his wife would not give up and kill herself to get out of this situation. You must have a way to intervene at any point if stress builds up.

Finally I do not know any woman that would not smash a dinner plate over her husbands head when she realises what he has done.

At the very least each of these two would never Know when payback was coming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
wow!

Really well written and extremely sexy! I loved that their husbands were the ones behind everything! Haha

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