All Comments on 'Bouncing Back'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good premise.

But rushed.

Sex begins too abruptly. Continues without needed details. Ends too quickly. Both the pussy-rubbing orgasm and the blowjob.

Not even a hint of a titty fuck? Even though she kows he's a tit man? Not even a promise of one later?

Four stars.

MadMizeMadMizeover 1 year ago

Great start. Keep it up.

daiblo598daiblo598over 1 year ago

great story would love to see how it develops.

Outcast17Outcast17over 1 year ago

I really hope this becomes a series

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

She keeps talking about how good he is at talking, but their dialogue is awkward and boring. Didn't make too much sense

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Sequel please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Mark is being played. Carmen is just using him and many otherguys that want her tits.

n0rdendmann0rdendmanover 1 year ago

Excellent fantasy of a girl taking charge and seducing the boy, so I can see what his attraction to her is, but I can’t at all see why she’s attracted to him. He seems to have little personality, can barely get a few words out with her witty remarks, and generally passively just goes along with whatever she wants. Otherwise, I enjoyed how she seduces him, yet it all feels rather random and comes off as quickie, one-night-stand sex because they just jump into it so fast.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice premise.

Heaven for a tit man.

Nice dialog.

Could have used some instruction/s about how she wanted them played with.

You wrote: "They really were to wet to wear...," You meant TOO, not TO.

Five stars.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 1 year ago

Boring. 😴

Why does every guy featured in a story have to be a trim/fit Adonis and every girl always has to have Double D tits? 😠

I'd rather read about every day NORMAL people. 2/5

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