by LurksForFun
Good premise.
But rushed.
Sex begins too abruptly. Continues without needed details. Ends too quickly. Both the pussy-rubbing orgasm and the blowjob.
Not even a hint of a titty fuck? Even though she kows he's a tit man? Not even a promise of one later?
Four stars.
She keeps talking about how good he is at talking, but their dialogue is awkward and boring. Didn't make too much sense
Mark is being played. Carmen is just using him and many otherguys that want her tits.
Excellent fantasy of a girl taking charge and seducing the boy, so I can see what his attraction to her is, but I can’t at all see why she’s attracted to him. He seems to have little personality, can barely get a few words out with her witty remarks, and generally passively just goes along with whatever she wants. Otherwise, I enjoyed how she seduces him, yet it all feels rather random and comes off as quickie, one-night-stand sex because they just jump into it so fast.
Nice premise.
Heaven for a tit man.
Nice dialog.
Could have used some instruction/s about how she wanted them played with.
You wrote: "They really were to wet to wear...," You meant TOO, not TO.
Five stars.
Boring. 😴
Why does every guy featured in a story have to be a trim/fit Adonis and every girl always has to have Double D tits? 😠
I'd rather read about every day NORMAL people. 2/5