by phoenixcinders
Excellent story I can't wait to read the next chapter. Definitely love to fantasy about this.πππππππππ
As someone who's written about Vamps a few times myself, I definitely enjoyed this one...I'm curious to see what happens next.
You have 11 stories marked part 1. Will you ever finish them or just be content with starting new ones over and over?
Seriously though, so many with promise, so many readers left hanging.
normally i love your stories but you lost me on this one. everything felt kind of rushed, and i just couldn't get into the premise. thanks for sharing though, the content has sucked in this category lately.
very good start
could become my favorit story
please keep on writing
This story... is absolutely ENTHRALLING... I felt like I was a slave to every word. I really hope you continue this... I couldn't stop reading. Maybe he goes on an adventure to find her.. or the coven and has some vampire run-ins along the way. Fantastic! Fantastic!
Since I have a vampire fetish the title aroused my curiosity. Now that Iβve read it you have my complete attention. I anxiously await each installment.
This was fantastic!!! Loved the pacing, the set up of the characters, building of the Vamp world and some lore... all of it was just top notch. Can't wait for more!!
i swear if you leave this story with no conclusion like most of your other ones i'm gonna be pissed
please don't leave it there. It says pt.01 so I'm hoping that means there will be a part 2. Honestly as much as i love most of your stories if this one ends here I'm taking you out of my reading list. This one has so much potential to be hot and romantic and loving. Please finish it.
Here we have a story revolving around a somewhat humble,shy guy,and a Futanari/Shemale Girl and the two are best friends,but Jenna goes off and gets turned into a Vampire,2 or so years later the two reunite,and she tells him she is a blood sucker,and wants to turn him into one too.
Also he would have to become her slave for however long to pass the loyalty test.She also confesses her love for him,and they proceed to have sex,or her pounding the shit out of his ass,and thinking she wanted to be with him forever,she just writes him a note saying I'm sorry Jack.You deserve better.
So Jenna goes on to live an eternity of leaving her bestfriend human,so she can suffer an empty existence.To be honest Jenna deserves an eternity without Jack,he was ready to do anything for her,even being her slave,but Jenna was the same scared teenager in school,and just ran like she always did. Honestly Jack deserved a normal girl who wasn't afraid of committment and hopefully he found the right girl,and lived a happy fulfilled life with her,while Jenna lived with heartache and misery for leaving Jack.This story had so much potential but fell way short.
Please continue. Make Jack to Jessica and he helps Sylvana. She turns her. The Jessica finds Jenna.
I love vampires ; and i love the fact that she gave him a blowjob + let him fuck her ass. Alot of shemale/futa stories focus on the futa on male side of the story ONLY which is sad. But uh whyd she suddenly enter his life, seduce him and then leave again?
+ she only came to find him after 2 years of being vamp? If she kept thinking about him and loved him so much why not sooner?
+ wth was that with calling his dick small and laughing at how hers is bigger.. totally not cool to do to someone you love