All Comments on 'Bound to My Mate Ch. 18'

no words for this, i really love this story lol kinda sad that u left it at a cliff hanger lol will be checking back constantly for a new update :)

Love it but I need more soon please.

Funny!I was just about to send you a nasty comment about authors who dont update their stories when I saw this! Outstanding as usual!!!!! please make this series a saga with a minimum of 80 chapters......lol!!!!!! O.k, on a serious note just continue until I tell you to stop. Hahaha. There are many more adventures they can have.May I suggest more rogue wolves,different types of witches or even vampires!

I am happy to see Liz's character develop.....really hated her at first! and stop with the cliffhangers already or I will send real werewolves after you....................!

I loved this chapter and cannot wait for the next one to come along.

Please don't leave it too long.

Happy New Year 2011

was a excellent chapter i throughly enjoyed it and can not wait for the next chapter

I know that peace can't be that far off because you have announced that this wonderful story is coming to an end. As to how peace will come, I know wait for the next chapter. This chapter was great. Having Liz try to be completely submissive to Joel was almost funny. And Joel telling her the pack wouldn't buy this sudden submission, was honestly at it's best. Watching them finally come together not only for the pack but for themselves will be conflicting. Good for the story sad for the reader knowing what it means. I don't know if I want you to hurry the next chapter or not. Great catch 22

for the alpha pair to prove their unity and strength in battle.

Seriously... Rogues in the woods again...

The chapter was absolutely awesome,fantastic,beautiful and I loved it but then you go and leave it on yet another cliff hanger and my mood when down hill! I was enjoying this chapter so much and looking forward to reading it again and then you hit me with another hated cliffhanger now I will be stressed out again waiting for the next chapter. Sigh. Oh well, such is life now! I will now go back and read this brilliant chapter again! Thanks so much for posting before the year finishes! Have a HAPPY NEW YEAR and post the next one the first week in 2011! LOL

Excellent work DW hope there will be many more chapters and stories in 2011!

Willie avid fan

something had told me to look and see if you had written another chapter and boy did i smile when I saw that you did. I don't know why but I have a funny feeling that another pack is going to help get the women back and maybe another mating will be formed. I can't wait till the next chapter. I wish you a happy new year and thank you for this wonderful story

Now that I've had my coffee and my brain is back in gear and I have read this fabulous chapter again, I think this coming fight to get their women back is just what they need to show the pack they can work together! I also think that they will find Alpha Sebastian Germain's mate when they defeat the rougues.

Once again this chapter is awesome, but the cliffhanger is NOT awesome! Ack! Stop doing that! And please post another chapter soon!!

I had missed ch. 17 while I was away. So I read both just now. It was so good. You really amped up the excitement and the pace seemed to move faster but not too fast to enjoy the developing relationships...you seemlessly joined couples and dealt with lots of emotion. I really enjoyed these two chapters. I had guessed the witches were behind it a while back so wasn't as surprised about that but I loved the use of Dia and how she worked with Elizabeth to fight against the witches and to protect her pack. I also love Dia and Will! They are really the type of couple that would be strong for the differences in their personalities. I am glad you will take it further and help restore the pack's faith in their alphas as well as help Elizabeth and Joel work together since they really never have. Can't wait for more.

Great story, loved it so far. Keep up the good writing. Cannot wait for it to continue.

i want more lol

this is a great story I cant wait for the next chapter thank you

I love your stories can't wait for more! :)

Just 2 more chapters!?! I guess that means another story is coming :)

Im sure anything you would post is just as good as this, although its hard to believe another story could be this good!

I can read and re-read this story, and still be just as intrested as I was the first time! I usually do not comment- I always rate and give you 5 stars- but I figured since your working so hard to write this for everyone's enjoyment, it was the very least I could do. Thank you for sharing with us, and have a happy, inspiring new year!

wonderful as usual and just like usual, you leave us with a cliff hanger *grins wolfishly* that does like get annoying at times hun..lol

Donna

You and these cliffhangers!!!!! Oy Vey!!!!! Just when I thought it was safe to breathe...Cliffhanger!!!! Hurry with the next stinkin' chapter Ms Cliffhanger!!!! Between you and JazCullen Im gonna be bald and crazy with you fabulous twists,turns, and CLIFFHANGERS!!!

seriously with the cliffhangers? I love your writing but stop teasing us!!!

Now new chapter please! I agree with spearman1 about the cliffies enough is enough we can well and truely do without them.

I do have another pet peeve though. When you wrote she shook her head "yes".

I don't know about you and other authors on lit but I usually nod/nodded my head to say "yes" and shake/shook my head to say "no."

and it's a really good chapter.<br>

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Where you did end it, another cliffhanger, is really beginning to get me down.<br/>

5/5 overall, PLEASE watch out for mechanism over-usage.

Have to agree with 'ShadowedDreams'. By ending it in the shallow water, you gave us a positive ending to counteract the negative ending in the previous chapter. Too many negative or sudden cliffhangers in one story give me a headache!

Other than that, very nice chapter. You worked through their dramas beautifully, taking the time to make sure everything was covered perfectly.

That Joel and Elisabeth will agree that she protect the pack and get them back to the den safely and he will take the warriors to get their women back and finally get rid of the large rogue pack they have been hunting for weeks. I was wondering what happened to the rogues that had eluded them so far.

i agree u should stop giving so many cliffhangers i love this story so far hope u update soon, plz

i've just read all 18 chapters straight through...its a good job i had no big plans for the day lol. Ive been totally captivated and cant wait to see what comes next. As for the cliff hangers, keep 'em coming i say, there's nothing like the happy frustration to keep readers coming back for more. Thanks for sharing such a great story

Can't wait to find out how everything turns out in this very well written tale. Read all 18 chapters in practically one sitting.

I love this story. I have silently read with increasing zeal. Now I am twitching for another chapter. I love your writing. Looking forward to more.

I just finished chapter 18 and I can't wait for the next. I will be sad when this ends! Thank you for writting such a wonderful story!

I've loved it ever since it came out and it just gets better and better every time.

I know we'll all be sad when the story ends, but if you really wanted to keep it going..................(hint, hint)

maybe Elizabeth has a kid? (hint, hint) lol

I've been waiting for every chapter you've written; it's a wonderful story, please finish soon.

When this story end, I pray your working on a new story. Because I am very hook to storytelling. Or you will be having to make a house call to a very sick were.

Ruy

P.s. I love this story.

I really thought something bad was going to happen to Rick and April and I was dreading it! But you've thrown in another twist and now I have to wait (willingly) to see who has been taken and who is going to rescue them....how about another spin-off?!?!

Please find an editor who can catch the grammatical and spelling errors. It is my passion and my appreciation of your work is diminished by the errors in your work. However, your story great, the pacing is wonderful, the development of characters is progressing well. Keep it up.

I LOVE HER!!!! I LOVE HER BOLD ASS MOUTH!!!! I love this story. You are my girl!

Passion, lust, dare. One of the best.

and the only good thing I can say is...

Ass whuppin... round 2

I was drawn to this story because someone who had written a story apparently the comment was that someone had read your story and had written similar in style.

This person is good...

But you are much better! Such a good way to open up a day off! By the by... I read the first installment yesterday and reread half to finish today!

...thanks for the insight as to how Joel and his mate resolved their issues and Joel's "humanity" in recognizing his faults. I personally think you went a little overboard in the submissive/regretful description of his persona, but then, he IS your character.

As for the sex, it was HOT and EVERYTHING I wanted to read. Knew you had it in you, but you was kinda slack in describing the sex of the pack and the possible open amazement, desire, or speculative appreciation of the human women in watching some of it. I wish to have know about pack sex, especially singles who were not mated trying out twosome or three some sex...even a description of males stroking males...oh well , one can only imagine and you can always include those thoughts in future stories huh?

Anyway, you can write your ass off! YOU ROCK! It is TOTALLY your world and I have the pleasure of "peeking". Thanks.

what would happen if Elizabeth was doing a blowjob, and the knot got stuck in her mouth. Would she be able to detach herself?

The mental image I have regarding the previous comment is so damn funny. Wow. Talk about a mouthful. But an intriguing thought, nonetheless. I always thought the knot only formed when the male was behind the female, but I could be wrong. This story rules.

I've never laughed so hard... That was an interesting comment to say the least! Anyway... In all the stories I have read except for a few I think the not only happens in hybrid form. Since he wasnt and wasnt even close to coming I dont think she had anything to worry about. But that was a damn good comment! I needed that. Great story. I hope there will be more of it. I would love to see what happens the next year when she goes into heat and if they have pups. It just doesnt feel like its done you know what I mean. I love this story though. Please keep writing!

I think a man dancing for his woman is one of the sexiest things on the planet. It is primal and so damn provocative. Thank you for including that imagery in the tale. I have always felt that it took things to a whole other level sensually. In some tantric practices it is an encouraged activity. Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmm so sexy............thanks for sharing. I have loved this story every step of the way.

I howled with laughter as Joel ripped the door off the truck Elizabeth was cowering in. He is such a mixture of alpha strength and gentle lover.

This story just never lets up!

For a minute I thought Rick was a bad guy and stole April. Thank God, lol.

That I too thought Rick was a bad guy who'd fooled the pack & his brothers...I was starting to get a lil flustered by that cuz I really really like his character w/ the human women & especially April. Thank goodness!!!!!

Fantastic last couple of chapters! WOWZAAASSSS!!!!!!!!

This whole - you get a mate, and you get a mate, and he gets a mate... Well, it is a bit much.

Loving all the action! The two alpha "bitches" uniting against the witches, and showing how it's done! Dia is amazing, LOVE her. And love how Will is with her, so sweet. And excuse me, but I don't think enough was made out of the fact that Liz ran like the wind, carrying Dia, while heavily injured!!!! And generally kicked ass left right and centre!! The pack should appreciate that their alpha female is so brave and amazing! :)

I also loved the way Joel had a road block set up, and how he ripped the door off.. :)

Great story, can't wait to read the rest! xxx

(My 'drama-loving' side was a little peeved that she didn't appear to be in mortal danger with the wounds... or so it seemed afterwards...? I would have wanted to see him all worried about losing her due to the injuries, or lamenting about it afterwards... although he did bite his fist in the car, so perhaps he *was* worried as hell.. loved it, still.)

I've never read an erotic story that kept me so captivated... You develop each character like some of the best novels out there. You should write a book! I stay up late reading this because its so good! The visuals you give are so descriptive and well written. Thank you so much!

This is by far the best story I've read in this site. I hope you write more stories like this.

I am having a wonderful time .

Stephen J

Was Davonna 170+ years old?? How could she know Linda and her intent and steal her body for the source? What was the refrigeration 150 years ago to keep the "source" viable? I would think there would be some other story to her obtaining the body. If you publish this, you might consider addressing this differently. Other than this, I like the story immensely!!

Ch. 4

"You asked about Linda, she was Lucas's mate, ...She used magic to poison the pack leaders above her, her and a group of others that felt the same way. The poison didn't work right and they were caught."

"Lucas was not so lucky and has lived the last hundred and fifty years as an outcast."

Ch. 18

"Linda wanted power in the pack and was going to use source magic to accomplish it. The witches wanted the money such powerful spells would bring. It seems it was a mutually beneficial arrangement for them. Linda's death stalled Davonna. She had to learn to use the source's decaying body and it took time," Joel surmised."

Loving the story.

For someone writing her first story you are amazing - even if it wasn't your first story it would be amazing.

Two things puzzle me though:

1) you wrote this in 2010 and it's now 2019 - how come it's still only a hobby?

2) I've been called "The Proofreader from Hell", but I'm having trouble coming up with any typos, etc. You must have an amazing editor.

One thing did seem out of place though - At one point in the story Elizabeth exclaims "for the love of Luna". Considering how new she is to being a werewolf, this doesn't seem a natural exclamation for her.

Still a problem with its versus it's, and reign instead of rein.

Stop complaining, everybody makes mistakes. Some people are good at writing fantastic stories, other are very good with subjects like grammar. Maybe you should offer to help them instead of complain about it.

Hello. I've said already in another chapter this is my Third RR and in this one I'd like to say I STILL hold my breath during their mission...! LOVING their back and forth And how you describe Dia freaking out, like when he ripped off the door she scrambled to Get Out Wanting to Run and if not for Will she Would Have! Even Love her foul mouth! I'm nowhere near as bad as I was but I'd say I'd make any foul mouthed person proud! I Did learn from my brother whom our mother said he'd make a sailor blush! This is PHENOMENAL work!!! I'm mostly on Wattpad but you're not so I come back to Lit for this and other stories too! I will also hold my breath on what's to come...you're THAT GOOD!!! And like another commenter said Warning Addictive...but a GREAT ONE!!!