All Comments on 'Box of Candy'

After the beating he gave her, she called the police. Guess who spent the rest of his life in prison as Bubba's Butt Buddy? Poorly thought out drivel.

1 star

Hateful not sexual

This needs to be in Noncon. This isnt consensual by any stretch of the imagination.

It didn't just look like a crime scene in that room, it was a crime scene. There is a difference between rape fantasy and rape. Guess which this was. It is an affront to post this in a consensual category. Post it in noncon, you will get appreciation from the proper audience.

This story was perfect in every way! I loved it!!!! It was straight out of my fantasy play book. Please give us another chapter. PLEASE!!!

So disturbing.

Well written! Thank you.

Fascinating. Would have given you a 5 if there were more details provided re: their internal emotions and motivations as the story unwound… and also the characters’ ultimate realization of who they are to one another professionally and a hint as to the repercussions. …Perhaps this story will continue? I definitely enjoy your way with words.