All Comments on 'Boyfriend Gets a Hall Pass'

What a nice start, but he just penetrating and leaving his juices seems like a lost opportunity to me.

I gave you a 5 for the general premise. I love lots of dirty talk. The dirty talk just seemed a little forced like a high school play though - not trying to be mean - just I'm hoping you'll write again and this time the dirty talk is a little more organic sounding.

Need part 2 so badly