All Comments on 'Boyfriend Material Ch. 04'

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tennesseeredtennesseered6 months ago

Such vivid imagery and such duplicity. Makes for potent erotic tension. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I feel like this is just a rehash of the last chapter, which was a rehash of the first chapter...it's just a bit boring without any progression.

darthnader19darthnader196 months ago

Yeah it's needs more progression getting a bit repetitive

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I miss your updates to this and your Weddings story. I hope you come back to the site soon! I'm really addicted

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Thank you to everyone who reads, follows, and is so generous with your comments on my stories! I love hearing from readers and always respond to PMs. Ladies: I'm that guy you knew in high school who was inexplicably shy around girls, but who would always help you with yo...

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