All Comments on 'Boyfriend's Approval'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What a hopeless piece of incoherent bullshit.

WittonWittonover 1 year ago

Politically incorrect but you know that already.

The backstory was way too much tell and not enough show; the rape scene was very well done.

I especially liked the ending: leave it to the reader to create their own conclusion. Nothing you write will please everyone.

Five stars

LordDeanLordDeanover 1 year ago

I did enjoy the story. It was erotic to say the least. Write more, if you know what's good for you. :)

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