All Comments on 'BP Post: Houseboy Needed Ch. 01'

Too short. I hope future chapters are longer.

I am eager to see how this develops

Thank you for writing and posting here.

I was just so excited about the story and so many fun things that will happen I wanted to just get this first one our. Thanks for the feedback, will definitely keep it in mind!!

This story has a lot of potential. Quite a few guys have similar desire but are afraid to act.

It sucked big time. Thought it was going to be a whole story not just a tease!

Once again, as with your other story, it’s very short and leaves the reader unsatisfied. Despite how eager you may be to have your story in print you have to balance that with is it what the reader was expecting and whether they now share your enthusiasm. As I’ve commented elsewhere it’s now nearly a year since you followed up these stories and it may never happen which would be a pity because this story, like your other one, has great prospects.