All Comments on 'Brad Is Looking For Something Ch. 01'

Can't wait to read more!

The dialogue between the two sounded exactly like it came from a player and his next conquest. Nicely done! Let's have more, and soon.

let ann be an easy target for brad, that boy needs to earn his cream, anyway always taste much better when earned :D

...jump through hoops, pant, grovel and crawl over broken glass to get it. I like a confidant man, but you throw player into the mix and you've got nothing but trouble especially since he's the roommate's ex. He needs to prove he's worthy.

Brad is a bit of an ass it would seem. He is very bold and upfront. At least she knows where she should sit when he is around and that is not to close. Thanks

I liked it and I can't wait for more, and I agree with the others please don't let him get it too easy.

a drop kick in his scroties

developement towards just fucking. almost no carachters described but already his hand in the honey pot?

good start with brad try his hand so to speak. but even as Ann wants to get that cock of his it some times work to play hard to get. even if Ann's panties

are very wet and she's gagging for his him to fuck her.

great start now i just wonder what's cumming next. my lovely lady.

but what ever nice story exciting writing.