All Comments on 'Brain Games Ch. 09'

This is my favorite story right now on the lit. There is something about these characters that comes across as what I remember being like in college (okay, maybe slightly better than my college experience). You have threaded he needle, in that your characters are attractive, there's some sexy mind control but it is great how you have the most impact by making other people excited about the potential of sexy mind control - without needing to control them, and you also talk about consent. Please continue this series!

I Agree!

Yes yr chapters were too short. The first one, I felt a good connection with the story, but I told myself there wasn't enough to vote on. After the second chapter, I confidently gave you a 5. This chapter is just right, but the earlier ones are too short, maybe combine 1 and 2 etc. Love yr story, all 5's.

Cheers.