All Comments on 'Brain Games Ch. 10'

a bizarre one

Great chapter! This story is very fun to read. Sounds like Enkins or someone was controlling the girl at the end.

I noticed the only chapter that doesn't have the red Hot stamp, is number one, plus one other that you placed in another category. I don't think this works. I think the whole story needs to be in one category, or its detrimental to the author. Great story, thank you. I'm now going back to give ch1 5 stars.