All Comments on 'Brain Games Ch. 14'

Very strange, but the plot thickens! Keep going, it's great.

That's was great! I like your story and where it is going with Maddy. More sex please!

Interesting. On this story I see "More of this series" and a link to 13, yet on 13 I see no link to this.

Typo "He text Lisa" of course that is "He texted Maddie".

Once again you manage to answer one mystery only to add like three more which I have to admit, it’s one of the reasons this story is so compelling. It is undoubtedly a very strange yet original concept for a story or at least it is to me but since all things need to start somewhere, originality is a major plus. I find the creatures that can’t normally be seen are a great mentally visual aid to help give a frame of reference to what is going on regarding the energy being created, redirected and released so choosing a tick like creature was perfect. I can’t even imagine where you will take us next but I do want to be a part of it. Thanks for everything you are putting into your chapters and story.

J.D.