by Sissyhalo1
Lots of typos and grammar mistakes made this tough to read. I enjoy your stories. Edit, please!
I liked some of content of the story but it was hard to follow ! A 3 from me.
I really like the form and format of this story. The heavy use of repetition and the short sentences strongly echo the online sissy hypno vids and that was refreshing and fun to read.
I luv it. Surprise feminization. But I was hoping for group sex between males, femmes,bimbos,women and trans. Amilil
There are some really poor authors on this site, but you are definitely setting the bar at a whole new level. How low can you go???