Brandi Gives a Party

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Now let me quote my favorite verse in the Bible. (Vengeance is mine saith the lord.)

For you people who call my wife a slut and me an idiot for loving her. We have now been married ten years. Seven and a half since this incident.

After all this happened Brandi and I took a two week vacation. No we did not take Ellen.

My next story will be on that vacation.

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14 Comments
CtwistedpairCtwistedpair7 months ago

Not a bad story...Difficult to read with such hideous spelling and grammar mistakes. Get the Grammarly free version.

docrxdocrxabout 3 years ago

2 for the effort. Learn to spell!

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Ministers

Is this Aretha's minister? The same one who groped Ariana notso Grande. Maybe it was old Jesse instead. Love those ministers.

bonnietaylor2bonnietaylor2about 8 years ago
5

for a good effort and content and to help offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote. Eat shit annony!!

wonder203wonder203about 8 years ago
1*

The word bad does not describe this piece of childish tripe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
She

still had the new preacher though.

studebakerhawkstudebakerhawkover 8 years ago
@egotrixie...

50 miles in 20 minutes = 150 miles per hour. What kind of car are you driving?

EgoTrixiEgoTrixiover 8 years ago
Honestly: "A few hours" for 50 miles...

...what kind of car are you refering to? Honestly...that distance doesn´t take longer than 20 min...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
The writing is sophmoric at best

If you're going to rely on information from a previous story as a thread to this story, you should either mention that in the prelogue or indicate that this is a chapter in the title. You really need an editor. Your sentence structure and word usage is terrible. I'm not the Grammar Police but when it makes a total mockery of the story, you need to rethink your story telling.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Story Premise Wasn't Bad

But please get an editor. So many writing errors to list made this almost unreadable.

impo_61impo_61over 8 years ago
The revenge...

"Vengeance is mine saith the Lord"!!! But in this case another saying in the Bible is: "Who kills with an iron tool, with an iron tool must die..."; Question: Who took his wife to the infamous minister? The friend!!! What happened to her? She got a house to live, money and his wife too...She didn't know what the minister was like? she also went to his counselling sessions! he didn't try to fuck her? Not believable!!! A lot to explain...so just 2*

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
not enough happened to the black asshole, and the wife got away free = she didnt have to drink or fuck

i was drunk is never an excuse for anything, you by your actions chose to be drunk, its a choice

tazz317tazz317over 8 years ago
THE PARTY WAS MORE LIKE

Brandi is the party. And she is not a fine girl no-mas. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I was expecting more revenge.

The story was not too bad.

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