All Comments on 'Brandi, Protector of the Gateway Pt. 11'

It's been a fun ride. The mental change aspect is titillating . I don't know how the group got throught the first season because they seem very inept. They way you describe most of the girls bodys is very well done. The title is very catchy and the world is quite intresting. I'm hoping for them to "win" in the end so the reader can imagie that somewhere they are still up to demon fighting hijinks.

Well it feels so useless like come on there should be some resistance by default in nature from a protector if she was trained to fight demons and all. She must have been trained for atleast not being what is being potrait here.