All Comments on 'Brandy's Bedroom'

Very hot!! Hope there's more coming...

Loved the advances escalating, momentarily retreating and then advancing again. It was funny how the dad had to be coaxed initially and by the end their roles had completely switched as they both teetered at the abyss of full-on penetration. Full marks for this and the zing in dialog that is ever a strong point of this author. *****

Well done

This is a nice beginning. But I worry about sequel chapters. "Daddy Spanks Brandy," "Daddy Fucks Brandy's Ass," those would be superficially exciting, but sort of mechanical and rote. There would be no conflict, and very little surprise.

I would like to see Brandy try to seduce her mother and Uncle Henry (who may be having their own brother/sister incestuous relationship). Then, I would like to see the family reunited, with Daddy dominating and punishing both Mom and a sissy-boi Henry. Maybe that's too much spice for this vanilla story. But that would involve some conflict and surprise.

I hope Brandy gets pregnant with her daddy's baby - don't want her to fuck the mom or uncle it would detract from their special connection in this story

no need for a sequel, a prequel or anything...just leave it :)

What a tease, but such a delight to read.

Why is 18 the magic age when incest is a crime in most states at any age, only 18 states have 18 as the age of consent most range from 14 to 18, there are even some states that no longer have incest as a crime.

That is a Great story .I 'm glad to see another story from you .Hope you don't make us wait long for the next one .......

Great story with just the right amount of build-up so that it wasnt too quick or too drawn out. Almost perfect & very hot. Maybe a little more dirty talk especially as they were cumming but other than that pretty damn good. Love the Dads personality btw.

Good story, I enjoyed reading it, I was expecting Brandy to say her she caught her mom and uncle fucking. Good story nonetheless

A friend recommended this story and I'm so glad he did. It is well written and very enticing.

Well written and arousing.

"All right. I guess I like the dominant and submissive relationship between a father and daughter, the forbidden nature, the trust that's already between them." That's the best descriptive explanation that I've ever seen. Loved this story as much as I've loved your others. I also agree with bwmom's comment. This story is perfect left as it is. No need for sequels. Thank you for sharing with us once again!

.....but the sex still not as good as "Violating Mummy". Recall? Heh!!

3***.

Perfect as is. No sequels for it will ruin it. *****

Very wet....

It was believably perfect with your characters and i thoroughly enjoyed it.

5*****

Amazingly fresh and decadent, 100 stars

That was fucking HOT!

Your dialouge throughout the story is WONDERFUL, making it quite enjoyable in that context. Also the concept of this story is refreshingly unique and original and it flowed nicely with your eloquent writing so I encourage you to keep writing by all means. The only real problems i had with this story is: 1. the slight submissive tone throughout it, but it wasnt extreme enuff to make me stop reading it. If thats your personal prefrence thats fine and you should continue to write them thusly, however i need a very BENEVOLENT tone to my stories to really enjoy them. 2. I also need realism (which was 50:50 here) and no really nasty language when it comes to (first time together) stories. Virgin people in general dont perfectly time thrusting with their partners or use any other positions other than missionary, those things come only with experience and comfort levels with the other person. reg/reverse cowgirl is not a position an utterly inexperienced person would be comfortable doing. might wanna keep that kinda stuff in mind when writing in the future, never know who that stuff will be important to (like me). 3. while brilliantly described, i felt the base line emotion was FAR from a father who loves his daughter enough to be intimate with her and it felt a bit too jaded. Try rooting more in a love based scenario and it might get more results.

This was a great story. I really liked your plot and character development. The bad mouthing the mother did was so real. The use of truth or dare was very unique. Keep writing.

I've never shied away from your more hardcore rape stories and I honestly didn't know if I'd like such a departure from your usual body of work. But as always, you created great characters, superb dialogue, and described hot nasty sex so well. Keep it up!

Please do a second one this made my pussy throb so hard

This made me so fucking horny oh my goddd you should make more my pussy hurts

I loved it, the dialogue was perfect and it all was like a movie in my head.

Amazing this could be movie, please add more chapters it's so good you should be a writer .

its is soooooo realistic as other people said it was like a movie inside my head you should definitely make a movie Feeling so horny right now............

Your writing skills are phenomenal, the characters seem so human double thumbs up!! Thanks for such a great read!! :)

My cock is rock hard from this.

Ugh. This turned me on so much.. might have to read it again. ;)

I came so hard while reading this. This story was absolutely amazing.

This was one of the best stories I've read on here. not too long not to short and with just the right amount of build up. I had to fight to keep from cumming while reading this.

This was one of the best stories I've read here! Please write more!

I squealed like a retarded cheerleader the second that I saw that you had posted something new... and it was even better than I expected it to be! Freaking loved it. You write suspense better than anyone else in the fucking world. Was absolutely perfect. I'm already looking forward to whatever you decide to do next.

Please, please, please write more daddy/daughter stories.

Made me cum so hard. One of the best daddy/daughter stories I've read on here. Please write more like this! The more non consent the better!

That was probably the best story I have read to date. So hot with the best suspense and the right buildup and innocence.

The mother/son force story you wrote was one of the hottest stories up here! Sorry they took it down! And I really enjoyed the brother on drugs story too!! Your intense stuff is by far the best, and the more trickery involved in the seduction, the better! Can't wait to read what you come up with next!! :)

I am a retarded bitch for you stories screaming like i have the biggest meat between my legs

You won the award for absolutely soaking my panties. You can come collect your reward any time. ;)

I like the story. Kudos! make another one!

Shit! it was soooo amazing! i absolutely love it.

Very well told and not too far off from my "real life" first time father/daughter adventure. 😀

Love it! Came twice from this story, make a sequel!

This story made me NEED to get fucked. I'm so fucking g horny Daddy!

My fingers are so wet, lodged deep inside my dripping pussy.

I'm horny as hell now and so wet...

I literally came so hard and intense, I loved it.. been reading this kind of stories and never found the right one(realistic one) until now I loved the way my pussy is still twitching from the inside and my clit is so swollen right now if I touch it I cum again!!!

He clearly loves and yet wants his daughter, as if it were the most natural thing in the world. I love how he never once did anything she didn't want him to, even when he's dying for her pussy. And God the background story.. A daddy who is so far into his daddy daughter fetish that his wife divorces him in the end. I want this so much I feel like crying.

im reading this while I cant touch my pussy and its swollen. I just wanna cum.

Damn, that was good! I didn't even make it all the way through! You are so fucking awesome. <3 xoxo, Brittany

Brilliant story, loved the mutual manipulation of the game. Kept me up until the end. Don't know why you call yourself Vanilla, as your stories are far from that. Hope you keep on writing as you have a massive following

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The sexual tension slowly perculated and built to a boiling point right up to his slipping her the tube steak! Great little story!

i don't know what got into you that you decided to keep everything so nice and sweet this time, but boy howdy was it hot! i sure hope your next one is done soon!

It would be nice if The uncle Henry and Brandy's mom caught fucking. That's incest between brother and sister. So now Brandy and her dad can fuck openly even in front of the mother without repercussion.

I got fucking wet from this.💦💦💦💦

Holy GOD this is like gold dust!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DUDE YOU RULE! I'm off to get the rest of your writing and read the shit outta it lmao Pardon my language - this story has everything you'd want in a daddy/daughter illicit love story... it's just...... no words can..... GAH! SO GOOD!

- love danielle

That was funny as hell!! I loved it!! :).

I thought for sure it was going to be the typical daughter wants to fuck dad, dad acts like a pussy shipped douche whining constantly about how wrong it is, ROFL. Boy, was I surprised!! ;)

...now, if they could just get her mom and uncle fucking on video everything would be perfect, hehehe!

This story rocked my world, as I fantasize about the daughter I don't have, this game is intense sexually and amps up your drive till they're fucking. I was dripping pre-cum. Personally I would like more to this story, marriage, pregnancy. More breeding and milking, the love shared is electric! Thank you for this story, im going to re read and cum now!

This was amazing! Exactly what I was looking for. Off to read more of your work!

As I was reading I was praying you don't drop the ball. And you didn't, you stayed the course slowly moving towards the inevitable all the while maintainin the right amount of reluctance!!!!!! Edging at its best. Favorite story botton where are you? Hope you write more stories here in the future!

A great fucking story. The very best.

Thank you so much for writing this brilliant piece! So many details that relate to me, personally.

I like the continuity of the "truth or dare" all the way until the end. If that was me, there is no way my baby girl would have lasted midway through that session, I would have to fuck or stop playing as well. ;)

Instant favorite for me, forever. I will recommend to the end!

Excuse me while I go... do stuff.

Loved the build up, made it very intense.

So good! You've got a fan for life.

Wow! How did you manage to cram all that build up & dirty talk & hot sex into 3 pages ? You can write. This is a perfect story to get off hot & quickly. Love the dirty dialogue & the attention to detail of the back and forth sex teases. I am so turned on that I want to cry because I need more. Thanks so very much for the wonderful story. I have read your other stories and I have commented on those as well. All favorably! Keep up the great work!

Fuuck, havent read this one in a while! I stayed hard through the whole thing! Nothing like a slow tease read, just rubbing a few fingers over your tightly stretched material in just the right place to keep the blood pressure up :)

Thanks!!

Amazing. Just amazing.

A definite 5+++!!! He exploded into me when her Daddy filled her. I never need a dare to have my nephews cock inside of me. I must have cum four times before I got cream pied. Great story and we read more,

TBC

I loved it...I got sooooo horny after reading it

Love your teasing stories! They're good but usually too long. This one was just right. Please write some more 3 page ones. Lots of teasing seduction on either side cumming to a final climax. Brilliant thank you!

Loved the Truth or Dare game aspect, knowing that in the end,they'd fuck

Good pacing, lots of hot chatter between them, and his cock sliding through her wetness.

Great Story !!

I've been screwing my dad since I was 19(10 yrs now) think we may play truth or dare tonight

This story was just soooo awesome, but could you write a continuation to this story where it shows us what happens after the summer is over.

i need to know what happens next and for the rest of the summer.

I have always been a beer person but think I might try some brandy.

There is taboo and there is illegal. This smacks of the latter. The guy hasn't seen his daughter in 3 years but he starts perving on her right away staring at her butt. Then we suppose to believe his kid is 18? Her outfit is just like a schoolgirls, plus how many 18 year old women like to jump on beds? Or are virgins? Or still play truth or dare? With their Dad? Maybe it needed more background. Was the guy getting out of jail or something? It hints of molestation. Or at the very least statutory rape. I hope Henry beats him with his knight stick.

Very good writing.

My very favorite story....so well written and erotic beyond words. Please write more!

of the number of times I've read this. Beautiful, slow build to an amazing climax. Well written sex.

This story made my cock explode when the cock head went into her. It was a really, really go cum! Thank you for a great story and a great cum!!

You need an editor..

She seemed to size it up as she "titled" her head.

Heat enveloped my cockhead, sending pleasure shooting down my shaft and up to my "braining", but I quickly hit a wall as her fist bumped into her pussy.

I've always liked your stories.. Pen name vs. story content, is such irony, and I love it!

But I agree it could use an edit. For instance...

*She peeked at me between her eyes{fingers}.*

Still, 5 stars. :-)

keep them cumming that was hot

Hot!

Great story ! It ended on a happy note. I thought she was going to turn on him so he'd end up in jail and she'd get the house. Of course that could still happen in part 2 and then part 3 could be the REVENGE !

Great and super hot story!

Girl goes back to court as an adult, tells a jury that her cop uncle was coming over and banging her mom all the time as soon as dad would leave for work. Half the time fucking in the living room right in front of her minor self!

Cop loses job, both get jail time and everyone lives happily ever after!

That was so hot came so fast!!

Please make a sequel.

Is there a squel? When is it coming?

I love you stories so much. One the best authors

This is THE best story ever written, I love it! Please continue writing, all ur stories are incredibly hot and amazing!!!

I love this one so much! I wish there were more chapters!!!

Wow! That was amazing writing and holy shit probably the hottest one I ever read!

That's gotta be one of the hottest daddy daughter stories I've ever read. That build up had me drenched and when I came my whole body was twitching.

Definitely my new favorite author.

This story is so hot my pussy is throbbing. Fav story.

So freaking hot! I need a sequel.

Definitely needs a sequel!!