by QuietStorm1970
If you decide to do a part 2, the more references Brandy makes to Kristin (her age, her small boobs, etc.) the better. The hottest thing about this is the narrator's reluctant betrayal of his fiancee, and the more Brandy makes him acknowledge Kristin's inadequacies, the hotter it gets.
Brandy has gotten his attention...please take this further and show us how she breaks him and replaces the fiance. A hot betrayal story.