All Comments on 'Brass Beds'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Sweet Story ...

... With real elements of romance which we rarely see.

Jim44444Jim44444about 11 years ago
Good story

I enjoyed the story line. The characters were believable. However, the tehnical glitches were distracting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
superb

The change of view, so quick yet so ... 'like a painter's brush stroke' (a good one i.e)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

interesting, surprise ending

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
great writinga

great writing, definitely deserves a sequel.

AmbivalenceAmbivalencealmost 10 years ago
What an odd feeling...

To feel like I just read a romance story - while immersed in what is inarguably one of the LEAST romantic industries in the world...

A beautiful look under the skin, as it were...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Another

And the hits keep coming! Or...cumming...depending on how you view things. You invest so much emotion into your work I am truly envious. Good job. I am going to keep reading. Can't favorite you yet...but I am getting close! :-)

Sincerely, Payenbrant

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Odd, but even doing that .. I know

that in the middle of it there are little things going thru a mans mind that are "distracting" that can effect performance and it was cute to know that and add it into the story. No, it isn't just the dick that is involved. Scotty

JAUNTYOLDONEJAUNTYOLDONEabout 8 years ago
If you . . .!!!

If you haven't tried it . . . When I was 27 my girlfriend lived with her aunt and my girlfriend asked me for a special favor. Seems her aunts 50th birthday was coming up and auntie wanted something special and me being male and totally clueless said "well what does she want?" and Janet pointed her finger at me and said "you." Well auntie got her present and I got educated much more than once that night !!!

Crusader235Crusader235over 4 years ago
Wow

I say wow because I never really thought about the people behind the porn. You have us some insight into real people involved in what can be a very heart breaking industry. I do hope you will do a sequel someday. Five well deserved Stars! Thank you for opening my eyes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
very enjoyable

wonderful perspective, a secret out in the open. Very enjoyable read

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