by MSTarot
I enjoyed the story line. The characters were believable. However, the tehnical glitches were distracting.
The change of view, so quick yet so ... 'like a painter's brush stroke' (a good one i.e)
To feel like I just read a romance story - while immersed in what is inarguably one of the LEAST romantic industries in the world...
A beautiful look under the skin, as it were...
And the hits keep coming! Or...cumming...depending on how you view things. You invest so much emotion into your work I am truly envious. Good job. I am going to keep reading. Can't favorite you yet...but I am getting close! :-)
Sincerely, Payenbrant
that in the middle of it there are little things going thru a mans mind that are "distracting" that can effect performance and it was cute to know that and add it into the story. No, it isn't just the dick that is involved. Scotty
If you haven't tried it . . . When I was 27 my girlfriend lived with her aunt and my girlfriend asked me for a special favor. Seems her aunts 50th birthday was coming up and auntie wanted something special and me being male and totally clueless said "well what does she want?" and Janet pointed her finger at me and said "you." Well auntie got her present and I got educated much more than once that night !!!
I say wow because I never really thought about the people behind the porn. You have us some insight into real people involved in what can be a very heart breaking industry. I do hope you will do a sequel someday. Five well deserved Stars! Thank you for opening my eyes.
wonderful perspective, a secret out in the open. Very enjoyable read