by drewriter
I think the only thing that detracted from it was the gender changes first her, then him etc.
that was kinda short but it was soo erotic. I also want to head to Brazil someday hit up the clubs and the beach like you did hook up with some sexy women or trannys.
you need to watch how you switch the "he" and "she'. Totally off putting.......pick a gender and stick with it.....personally....if the person has tits and looks like a woman......its a SHE.....just with some extra parts......my .02
Agreed with the previous posters, there is a need to just say "não" to this misgendered "he/she" wording and simply address her with the pronouns which she prefers.
The "si, si" bit that keeps turning up also looks out of place. She's Brazilian? Odds are, her first language is not Spanish. The Brazilian language is a dialect of Portuguese (not Spanish), much like the American language is a dialect of English (not Spanish). Both of these countries have Spanish-speaking neighbours, but...