Break-Up Make-Up Picnic Nix-Picked

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Hi everyone, just a sample as I'm new to writing. I hope y'all enjoy it, but please comment and follow if you like my style. Please suggest stories or scenes too. Michelle :)

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"...It doesn't have to be this way," he bemoans, "C'mon. I'm sorry, so..sor--"

"Fuck you, you didn't HAVE to finish with me," I yell back. (so much for the break-up make-up picnic; I'm biding my time.) "So you got a job across country, you DIDN'T have to dump me..." (Like I'll give into him so easily.) I reach out to slap him.

He grabs my wrists, tackling me down to the blanket on the floor, pushing my arms above my head and kneeing my legs apart before nuzzling himself between us, rubbing his hard cock against my wet cloth-covered mound. I'm apprehensive, but admittedly totally turned on. My heart is racing. I didn't know what he was planning on doing - I'm stunned like an animal in the wild; I'm his lustful prey, arrested, in place, intrigued by his determined features.

Our breath intermingles, his lips so dangerously close to mine. ​'Do it​' (my mind is singing) '​Kiss me​' (my heart begging for him to hear what my soul is pleading.) We kiss. Oh God, we kiss... To say it leaves me completely breathless does the beautiful heartbreak ache no justice whatsoever. I have never had a kiss like this in my life from no other man. I start crying. The moment is too sweet, too perfect; memories overflow my emotions...

He grabs my hair, bringing me closer to him; panting, stealing moments to regain air into our suffering lungs. The passion I feel is beyond me, our souls finally joining each other after being apart painfully for too long.

He lifts my skirt to my hips, shoves my panties to one side, almost simultaneously yanking at his belt and unzippering his pants. "Fuck, I'd forgotten your smell.." He takes in the air like a predating wolf.

I watch eagerly as he releases his hard cock before guiding it into my slick silky smooth pussy in an unapologetically swift fashion. I shout out unintelligibly. So good. So damn good. I wrap my legs around his hips and just let him claim me. I'm his. No matter how much I wanted to forget him, I realize that I can never.

He selfishly pounds me; I'm panting, crying out, forgetting we are not bound by inside walls, but are out in the open. My guttural cravings echo through the forested area as my back and ass scrape against the grass and sticks underneath the blanket. I know I will be suffering later for it, but nothing else seems to matter at this moment.

He strips me completely naked my full breasts springing forward out of my bra. He suckles my nipples, squeezes my tits together... so rough with my body yet so gentle. My pussy is so full with his cock. I have never felt so sated in my life. It's too perfect... until he pulls his cock out of me, suddenly. I'm a little embarrassed by my outward reaction - it's obvious that don't want him to stop. My insides clench in needy anticipation.

He smiles his devilish smile and flips my body over and has me on all fours. He

spreads my ass apart and uses his finger to find me again and guides his cock into me once more. He fucks me skilfully from behind. Our bodies slapping into each other. He grabs my tits and thrusts into me and sets a cadence I could live off of forever. I have never felt such a need like this before. It's primal. Wild. I needed him to claim me and he's branding me for life. I know I'm his for eternity now. He thrusts into me in three hard-pumping motions and releases his hot cum deep within me. God. Oh God.

We collapse onto the blanket facing each other... breathing... heavily... completely spent.. naked.. our hands... overlapping fingers. I am his. His!

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Soshameless11Soshameless119 months ago

This is amazingly hot!

Familyluv2114uFamilyluv2114u9 months ago

Although short…….

It hit the spot & got me off immensely soooo

THANK YOU 🫶🏽

I STILL can’t believe this is only one of your only stories submitted!

You are such a natural at writing stuff that gets people worked up.

JustaRegularHubbyJustaRegularHubby10 months ago

Short and sweet. Does JUST what it should!

EdHardwoodEdHardwoodover 1 year ago

Very sexy. Looking forward to more!

FuntimeFemFuntimeFemover 1 year agoAuthor

glad y'all like it guys <3

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