All Comments on 'Breakdown Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great Story!

Loved it! Can't wait to see where the story goes next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
not too bad

Its not a bad story. Could be a less confusing. If the guys are as old as they say, why would there be a button for anya to use to release the guys? just seems the timeline is a little messy. i like the fact that the girl isnt this perfect thin barbiedoll. :)

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