All Comments on 'Breakfast at Tiffany's'

by thelastenglishking

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TeenStudforOlderWomenTeenStudforOlderWomenabout 1 year ago

Nice Story! Thans for taking the time to write it.

AccelarVesterAccelarVesterabout 1 year ago

I'm hopeful that this story is continued - perhaps the daughter is brought in to the relationship as a third and/or the husband finds out and kicks her to the curb.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Another vote for a part two please

Pianist01Pianist01about 1 year ago

Hate being left in mid air,l like to see consequences!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Salacious buggery...

DebbieXDebbieXabout 1 year ago

Seems, you forgot who you're married to. Jack or Gordon?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Needs a follow up, there has to be a story to conclude or develop

WargamerWargamer11 months ago

Consequences?

What consequences?

Just the bitch continuing to have a blast.

This story is way unfinished, scores 1/5

wasagadavewasagadave8 months ago

Hot story. Well written with great detail. One slip with Jack vs. Gordon - happens to many writers.

I think she has more control than ever. Now that he's extorted her to submit, her daughter will kick him to the curb and hubby may, or may not divorce her, she'll still have money, and Rob could be exposed as the slimeball he is.

5 STARS

wasagadavewasagadave8 months ago

Just as a follow up; It amazes me how a male writer can slide into a woman's perspective. Albeit, somewhat suspicious. I wonder if a woman helped write this. But, I bet there's many a woman pleasuring herself during, or after reading this. Very Hot!

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