by BlowjobSuzuki
I like this. We have here lovers in love. It is not raw sex, but an expression of kindness in authentic relationship. I pray we all have sweet relationships like this. We even have the bonus of a recipe.
Really enjoyed your story! I like the playfulness of your characters
That was wonderful. I agree, this is what sex should be like. Fun and playful. You are a great writer and you painted the scene beautifully. I really enjoyed it... maybe enjoyed it twice.
This is what sex should be: fun and frivolous and so very powerful! What a great story!
Beautifully written! Exceptional, excellent, natural talent for making your words bring your characters to life in an ultra hot sexy way. I want this to happen to me. And so will a lot of women when they read it.
You sure have a great skill in writing. There is nothing like eating out a woman and giving her the best orgasm! Thanks for giving me that visual!
...you write so well...plus a recipe for me (my sweetie doesn't tolerate eggs except in quiches and such). Of course, I'll give attribution - I'll tell her I read it in a Harlequin Romance - she'll have a good laugh!
This was a sweet little slice of time between these two lovers. It held the right balance of eroticism and innocence for the intended effect. The recipe at the end is a nice touch!
Erotic to the end and the add of the recipe tops it of like smooth sauce( your choice of sauce)
Good catch, Nokk! I've fixed that and submitted a new version.
While I was reading this wonderful story, I noticed I was getting turned on because of how detailed the sex scene was. I'm a new fan of yours. I hope you'll write more in the future.
hi Suzuki, there has hardly ever been such an erotic breakfast-making, you are quite a writing talent. There's one funny point, though: John was sleeping naked next to Katelyn, but soon after he wakes up she thinks: How easy it would be to let him slide out of his boxers... When did he put them on? And another point: At times, your language seems almost too perfect, almost too sophisticated -- a story like that, with two people just getting up, and in the mood, might benefit from sounding a bit more sloppily... Still, I would even have given you 6 out of 5 stars.