All Comments on 'Breakfast in Bed'

hi Suzuki, there has hardly ever been such an erotic breakfast-making, you are quite a writing talent. There's one funny point, though: John was sleeping naked next to Katelyn, but soon after he wakes up she thinks: How easy it would be to let him slide out of his boxers... When did he put them on? And another point: At times, your language seems almost too perfect, almost too sophisticated -- a story like that, with two people just getting up, and in the mood, might benefit from sounding a bit more sloppily... Still, I would even have given you 6 out of 5 stars.

While I was reading this wonderful story, I noticed I was getting turned on because of how detailed the sex scene was. I'm a new fan of yours. I hope you'll write more in the future.

Good catch, Nokk! I've fixed that and submitted a new version.

Great dialogue, hot action, teasing pacing. Write more :)

Erotic to the end and the add of the recipe tops it of like smooth sauce( your choice of sauce)

This was a sweet little slice of time between these two lovers. It held the right balance of eroticism and innocence for the intended effect. The recipe at the end is a nice touch!

...you write so well...plus a recipe for me (my sweetie doesn't tolerate eggs except in quiches and such). Of course, I'll give attribution - I'll tell her I read it in a Harlequin Romance - she'll have a good laugh!

You sure have a great skill in writing. There is nothing like eating out a woman and giving her the best orgasm! Thanks for giving me that visual!

Beautifully written! Exceptional, excellent, natural talent for making your words bring your characters to life in an ultra hot sexy way. I want this to happen to me. And so will a lot of women when they read it.

This is what sex should be: fun and frivolous and so very powerful! What a great story!

That was wonderful. I agree, this is what sex should be like. Fun and playful. You are a great writer and you painted the scene beautifully. I really enjoyed it... maybe enjoyed it twice.

It has my favorite things :)

they both have great appetites...

Really enjoyed your story! I like the playfulness of your characters

Bon Apptit' I enjoyed your story keep up the great storytelling..

I like this. We have here lovers in love. It is not raw sex, but an expression of kindness in authentic relationship. I pray we all have sweet relationships like this. We even have the bonus of a recipe.

I'll have to try to make that some time.

Now that is a breakfast to DEVOUR! Mmmm, again and again!

A very tempting breakfast with multiple delicious courses.

This story was a lot of fun to read. Highly recommend!