All Comments on 'Breaking & Entering Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good way to end the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You dragged it a bit however all’s well that ends well.

PrickdickPrickdickover 2 years ago

You are a wonderful writer. Do complete the corridors of power series

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice story. I would have like more conversation between Naina and Fahim.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice ending....so will the duo return in the next episode?

Also like that Naina becomes much more sexual after the encounter. In that sense, this story has a very feminine perspective

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Naira and Fahim must rejoin and continue satisfying each other. Fahim must plant his muslim seed in her womb.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Amazing episode but I am saddened to see the communal bigotry in the comments here. You are by far the best writer here. Please avoid inter religious charterers in your future stories. There is really no need for it. Unless you want to correct the balance and introduce a Muslim female charterer with non muslim male characters. That would a befitting reply to such hate spreading communal bigots.

slutty_savitrislutty_savitriabout 2 years ago

Loved it . Wow . Its a treat to read your stories as always . Love the the unabashed communal bigotry. The characters appear real because of it. One thing I would complain was the sheer length of the story , after 2-3 fuck episodes it becomes repetitive, though i get it your aim was to showcase the transformation of the character , but they could be cut short. just my opinion. Transformation of character from Pim Proper to Slut has been a recurring theme in all your stories, which i absolutely love, but i also love the subtle twist in the plots . Keep it up. I would have gone bit filmy on this with back stories of fahim and teji being petty thieves but not rapists and that they always manage to get the woman they want . Yes eagerly waiting for next when these two master fuckers make a come back

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good writing. Pls do continue the new car series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very good story.... deserves to be continued with both coming back again and Naina welcoming them back truly becoming their woman

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Please write a sequel for this

Iam dying to read it

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please think of writing sequel ....maybe take leap for some years....Those Fahim and Naina scenes in the end with passion were fire....ufff...... literally made me squirt..

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please one more sequel

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Pls shorten sex part…. Its too much repetitive. Instead make her forcefully expose to outsiders… blackmail her … wear just blouse and very low petticoat and open door to husbands subordinates…. Etc etc

Kman280585Kman280585about 1 year ago

Loved it! One of best Non Con story ever written. Would really love if you consider writing a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Secretly hoping hubby goes out of town so her pals can stop by!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Hey come back

Indian erotica is getting boring.

Write a new story or continue this one but come back please....

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

A huge part is missing..

When did they leave her and got arrested

Nevertheless it's a good story

slowburn989slowburn9897 months ago

This is one of the best stories I've read in my life, it never fails to get me rock hard. Please, please write a sequel! I'd love for them to go back to her a few months or years later, but they don't force her, they just reach out and she finds herself wanting them again until she can't resist anymore

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

It can be clearly seen that the writer is a Muslim and hates Hindus. I suspect even some ISI link from Pakistan. Anyways. I want to tell him and others reading this that they are wasting their time if they think they can do anything to India by such stupid methods. We can change names and some details and it will be Muslim woman at the receiving end! Maybe sister or wife of the writer will have to face this! Good luck!

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