All Comments on 'Breaking And Entering With Steele Pt. 04'
by GabrielInkabus
- 9 Comments
redlion756 months agoThe kids are 28yrs old and are treated like 5yr Olds fuck that and begon she demon bitches
Anonymous6 months agoWhat a bitch the step mom and her moody daughter can go to hell. The father just pulled his son into a clusterfuck ripping up a book from his real mommy, the dad can get bent to. NO ONE CARES ABOUT HIM No one takes him into consideration they all just act like they own him and screw up his life. I hope to god theirs a he gets fed up with his family and moves out to greener pastures burn the family ending
Anonymous6 months agoI'm liking this series a lot. Even more than your other one and I liked it. Gotta say though, I agree with the other comments. If this were RL, Melody could just suck my cock. AJ and Candice are grown. Not sure of Melody's financial status and/or if she threatened to cut them out of the will, but no amount of money is worth that. Fuck off, you stupid cunt, unless you're gonna gimme some of that sweet looking pussy. But then, after you do, fuck off again. 5/5 stars.
Dewey Cheatham
ScottishTexan6 months agoI'm sorry. But I've suffered enough abuse similar to this in real life. I couldn’t tolerate reading about it in a fantasy. 1/5
Anonymous6 months agoPointless story at this point. Anything to do with Abbey is pointless. The rest of the story just seems like drivel. Lots of editing needed. The basic idea was ok, just really needed to get to the point.
Anonymous6 months agoNot quite sure what you have here. I mean Candice is 28 and AJ is older but are treated like kids. The parents are rapey at best. No sense of what game is being played and where the hell is Abbey?
eerie696 months agoFor the first time I read such a terrible story on this site
I can't even decide which part of the story is worse than the other
The behavior of characters that makes no sense or the Author's attempt to reduce their mental abilities to the level of monkeys for the sake of the plot
Or the lack of sequence of the plot and the Illiteracy of the Author
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