All Comments on 'Breaking Bella Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Keep going with this.

jleetechiejleetechieabout 1 year ago

Agree, keep going, the potential is there for a delightful noncon story!

MissedLifeMissedLifeabout 1 year ago

Really great start. If I am reading between the lines correctly then Jamie is even a bigger asshole then he appears. I look forward to seeing if I am correct about Jamie. He sounds like a huge a hole.

maddifremontmaddifremontabout 1 year ago

This is so good and fulfills a semi specific kink of mine (older manipulative/coercive boyfriend) that I really get off on. I can’t wait to read the next part

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

She should be honored to be used by him

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Definitely keep going, this has the potential to be a great non con story.

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Hi, I'm Elli. I'm a longtime writer, but have only started sharing my kinkier works recently. I also write "vanilla" fiction, namely fantasy. Most of my erotic works contain BDSM themes. I'm a submissive IRL and in a pretty much 24/7 ddlg-adjacent dynamic with the love of my l...

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