All Comments on 'Breaking, Breaking, Broken'

At first I thought, oh dear, here we go again. Capture, slave-training, wanton slaazzzz. I don't even get those cozy feelings of rage-enduced revenge anymore, so what's the point in reading them. I should have known when her nipples assumed the well-known role as 'the on-switch buttons'. Had a good giggle at that. This story was fun. Thanx for 'kevlar' - I can now catch myself one of those armoured guys (the ones that come with muscles?) at last. Evebroughtanaxthistime

I mean really. Have the little green men landed on the white house lawn?

So itense...

Would love to see superheroine version)

But excellent story, and loved the wrap up, which points out things a lot of people in every single genre don't get and try to pass as science.

Very vivid, great imagery, loved it.

I've been enjoying tories for about a decade on literotica. Next to the "Scheherezade... " series this is the best I've ever read! Pacing, wording, climax (hehe) simply wonderful! Please more of this!! Sending lots of love from Germany

Terror and Carnality are hard qualities to alternate . Treś awesome when it happens. Enjoy this writer for free while one can. It seems the sky is the limit.for lemur and author. Full marks. *****

Well written, interesting, and satisfying. Thanks for this one!

What a brilliant idea for a story - absolutely bloody loved it!

Thank you for this gem! <3

Just Wow! Would like to read more Lemur stories. Thanks for the fun read.

I love that everything is well planned in the story, and not so full of stupid characters that never think of rebelling or escape that everything falls into place. Thank you for a wonderful protagonist and story!

I absolutely adore this- from the main character being a villain instead of a heroine, to the extremely sexy breakdown, to the perfect reality bitch-slap at the end. 5 stars easy.

I’m a sucker for a good capture and break story, and this one was very original. Thank you for trusting your readers enough to go in new directions.

very great. It was quickly paced, good. It was definitely hot. The ending was unexpected but good and original. I like the inner dialogue and the repetition with the brainwashing. The fight scenes were hard to imagine based on what was written so I just inserted scenes I saw from superhero movies. The transition to where she killed him was a bit abrupt. Had to reread it a few times. But overall very excellent story. I liked that she was able to escape but also complete her original mission.

Best finishing line ever..

"The real balls are carried by female Villains. They're so big we have to keep them on our chests."