All Comments on 'Breaking Free'

Now that is how you do it.. I'm am still hard after reading and blowing my load, going reread it and try for number two.. please say you will write another chapter or 4...thank you for the great story..

Give that sexy Eric a bit of dark chest hair -- he's certainly mature enough for mom to have some stroking and maybe even tasting to do!

More. Much more, please.

I loved the story. The sex was smoking hot and the writing was superb. My one criticism was that it ended rather abruptly and things were not resolved in regards to her marriage and how she was going to leave her husband for her son. As she was going to be in Atlanta for a week and this was only day one, I'm hoping that means there will be more chapters.

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited love. Many mothers and sons desire this, too few give in out of fear.

WOW!! AN EXCELLENT STORY. MAY I SAY THAT THE ENDING HAS LEFT MANY OF US HANGING. IT WAS RATHER ABRUPT. WILL YOU PLEASE CONSIDER ANOTHER CHAPTER TO RESOLVE THE ISSUE WITH HER HUSBAND AND MARRIAGE, AND CONTINUING RELATIONSHIP WITH HER SON. I FEEL, AND IT IS QUITE OBVIOUS, THAT THERE IS MORE THAT BOTH THE SON AND MOTHER WANT AND SHOULD FULFILL. THANKS AND GOOD LUCK

Best story ever, pls more chapters..... Came so hard

Keep going. This story isn’t done.

Super hot. Loved the tease and then the release. First braless and then no panties at he restaurant, way to turn up the heat. Your dialogue was super hot: "Be a motherfucker, give it to me baby." Damn near made me cum in my pants. Great story. Hope for more chapters. I think Emily needs to have her tits fucked. :-)

That is so fucking HOT! Don't stop , Please give us another chapter!

please - more chapters. what a great VERY erotic story. loved it

More please, excellent story so far and I think mom stays and files for divorce to live with Eric? Thanks for this so far, 5 stars!

Wow!!!!!!!!! Eric claims her as his......& he has done the right thing...this is soooo fucking hot & pussylicious....when he ate her out

Wow what a hot story. Eric is a good son going down on his mom before fucking her with big cock. Love the sexiness of the mother seducing her son the moment she arrives. Great story.

A lot of your stories feel fine as one shots. I would love another chapter or two of this. Her moving in with him, finding out the asshole isn't his father etc.

Thanks

Wow, what a hot story. Too bad she wasn't just under 40 (37,38), she could get pregnant by her son. Love incest romance, so want them to be a couple. Maybe she doesn't know her age maybe both her parents (& fool husband) lied to her and changed the dates, just a suggestion. Great story so far.

Great sex . Thanks for sharing.

But silly things. They hate his dominating father/husband. First thing son does is command mum to be his alone and belong to him. She then orders him to make her his and his only.

What was wrong with the husband when she wants to be controlled.. Son only hates dad because they are the same controlling pricks. Nonroom for 2 doms and only one sub.

This story captured me from the time the picture of a hard cock was mistakenly sent to his mom and her response afterwards.Damn the sex was so hot.I wish I had a son that would do all this to me.I love everything about the story.I am hoping to see another chapter erotic and passionate like this one.I am so horny right now thanx to the author.

This was NOT just another fuck story, it was beautiful. And mom is not being dominated. And she is not being neglected. She IS being desired! Just what she has been missing and needing for a long time.

I am hooked on well written mother/son stories like this. I just stumbled on this one. I apparently suck at how to search for these quality stories. But I am open to suggestions. Thanks to the author of this story. -d

What an amazing story of total lust and hot sex.

I enjoyed this story a lot as it built up quickly and believably. The transformation to hot MILF worked for me and I congratulate you on most of your writing. There were mistakes that could have easily been corrected - 'puttered' being one of them.

A couple of times the story went in the wrong direction for me. The father having a mistress raised the question as to why he was a control freak? The son dominating her just like his father was another I didn't like. This was going to be a story about a son rescuing his mom, but it turned into something else.

Apologies if this seems patronising, but with a little more thought and planning, your work will be EXCELLENT!

O U T S T A N D I N G ........... THANK YOU BEST READ YET !!!!!!!!!!

What a wonderful story. Yes there are some grammar/spelling errors, but I was not looking for the great American novel, but now I want to fuck his mom too!

Absolutely amazing, I am never disappointed when I read one of your stories.

This is one of the best stories I have read. Your writing never disappoints. Keep up the good work.

I do wish your female characters were 10 years younger.

I read an article about how mother-son is the rarest form of incest. Now why do you think that is? First and foremost...attraction. Let's face it, men do need to be very very very sexually attracted to the woman to risk pursuing incest with her. And let's face it, we are all better looking when we are younger. Very very few people pushing 50, or older, are truly sexy. So, for me, it makes a story like this, less believable when the mother is much older.

Then you add in that mothers would be much less likely to be the one to instigate a relationship like this. She might try to throw out a little bit of flirty banter, or dress in something sexy, but she would likely do things to claim the moral high ground. In other words, she would make the son pursue hard, to make it very clear that this is what he wants...but that is very unlikely to happen. For it to happen, she would likely have to be very much the aggressor.

But again, for it to work, for him to take the bait, she would have to be very very hot. A true MILF in every sense of the word. She would have to be traffic-stopping hot. How many 50-year-olds do you know that are that hot? Very very few. Even a lot of Hollywood hotties, with all the extra help they get with personal trainers, nutritionists, and even plastic surgery, aren't normally hot when they are 50. Look at Demi Moore. She was so hot in her thirties, and even into her early 40s, but at 49, when Ashton left her, she was really showing her age.

So it is just really very hard to buy into the stories of a hot 50-year-old that still has a body and face to turn heads.

Some people here whine about the story if the mom is young, has big tits, and perfect body, and the son has a huge cock, and yet...that would be more realistic in real life. There has to be something very enticing to get the two to cross the line, and have sex.

That was hot.......

Wrong on all counts

She should have gotten a divorce a long time ago.

Sure wish my mom would have given in to me when I took her out for a breakfast date one year for mother's day but she pushed me away

I think good old Dad is a thing of the past. I would like to see a more loving relationship between them though. She is just now trying to escape from a dominating asshole. She doesn't want to run straight into another one, and he hates what his father has become; as well as what she has endured living under his thumb.

That doesn't mean that they have to engage in milk toast sex though. Both loving as well as wild animal sex can still be appropriate.

Such as; wait for him to bury that pole in her back door, Or Mommy Dearest may need to perform a prostate exam.

Very well done story! I LOVED it! Please don't listen to some of the other commenters, Emily and some of the other women/mothers (Miranda also, in another story) that You write about are NOT too old!! Some women really or actually don't start to, or don't get Hot until their 40's or 50's. And LOTS of other women are like fine wines, they just keep getting better and better with age. Look at Raquel Welch, Jacqueline Smith, Christie Brinkley, Ann Margret, just to name a few a few They are ALL Hot! AND, all over 60. So women in their 40's and 50's are NOT too old for you to be writing about. Again, GREAT work! And, keep up the GREAT work!

WTF, there’s nothing worse when a writer giving us half a fucking story, finish it....

I enjoyed this story. Unfortunately, it reflects true life. An insecure husband ignoring what appears to be an intelligent, good looking, and willing woman/wife. How she put up with his insecurity for 25 year is beyond me. The preceding is the result of good character and plot development. I rated this chapter 5 stars and am anxious to read the complete series.

Great story . Love it. AAAAAA+++++

(12/21/2021) YES!! There's a part two!

As the result of mistakenly sending his "Dick-pic" to his mother instead if his girlfriend, mom and son are now involved in a seriously intense affair...one that is going to transcend a moment, but go on for the rest of their lives.

Dad is in for a rude awakening, as the title of this reflects; son and dad, I predict, will have a battle royal, with Eric damaging 'daddy-dearest' the way he should be-physically AND mentally, for all the emotional damage done to Emily for all these years.

Question is...does Eric get dad's girlfriend too? Is she informed about dad & his bad behavior, leave him to the shelter of Emily and Eric...forming a new FAMILY unit!! Just a thought...

Definitely **5** stars, a most-gratifying tale...on to Chapter 2...

One of the best Mom/Son stories in years. THANK YOU for a fun read!!!!

This story gets better every time i read it.

Delightful. There's nothing in the world more natural than an adult son laying claim to his mother in a carnal, hedonistic embrace. Ownership may seem like a strong word, but we must remember that her womb was the son's first entry point into this world. She incubated him for 9 months before giving birth to his existence, and now her son rightfully reclaims her to reproduce himself inside again. No other man can OWN a woman like that, only her son.

Awesome loved it waiting on next part 5 stars!!!!!!!!

Loved it 5 stars

HOT STUFF AMIGO! CINCO ESTRELLAS!

I didn't read past the unrealistic cock some. You keepnruining your own storyline. Your obsessed with large cocks. What are your trying to comesate for. I was going to read a few others but it don't make senses anymore to continue. Oh fyi Hispanic cocks don't get that big your lucky to get 7inches.