All Comments on 'Breaking Free Ch. 01'

by muldoran

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Hot

I liked it. I would give it about an 80 to 85. Hopefully at some point she sneaks out behind his back and the whole thing gets out of control.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
A

I would like to have known if this was Cindy and Rick's first time with others as well. That surely wasn't the end of their first evening. There should have been sex with the wives and then more swapping. Each couple watching the other and making mental notes for later. Really needs to be continued.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Shorten your paragraphs..too hard to read

NOT BAD OTHERWISE...

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGalmost 4 years ago
Great story

Just the way swapping / sharing should be... in the same room

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