All Comments on 'Breaking My Own Rules Ch. 06'

I love your story please update soon if could say anything the only thing that irks me I guess in a good way but bad way is that he doesn't seem to care understand her feelings of it all he leaves comes back says it my way or else I guess in a sense hope they talk to explain each others side cause even if she is liking it its still against her will shes scared mad ect hope that makes sense of what saying please update soon and please don't take what say as a complant

I have to agree with Anon, it's very frustrating that it's so repetitive- he shows up breaks her will then leaves, repeat and repeat again. I'm hoping you change direction and add some more care and empathy into his character - if not, give her some balls! K thanx

It's still good - mysterious and sexy - but time for more, perhaps? I tend to agree with previous comments. Why is he MIA for long periods, choice or work travel? What kind of doc is he, Piled Higher and Deeper philosophy poser or cardiac surgeon who travels the third world saving dying orphans? Why doesn't she bite his presumptuous package? You are making her fold too easily given his stalkerness. When he is calmly masterful, it is rather hot, but I am turned off when he gets cold and on the verge of violence (choking at the fridge). Wanting to call 911 is a mood killer. Getting some of her thoughts is good, but I'm greedy for more of what is making her put up with him. Good orgasms is not enough. I can't decide how I feel about him explaining nothing and her having to bumble through learning all of this. Hope 7 comes soon.

Not many places allow public nudity and surely being arrested would be a worry and all that he does, even if this is just a story

Good chapter; good writing. I disagree with the anons. She is gradually being drawn in deeper with each encounter.

Does he have other subs when he is away?

I do enjoy your writing style and the characters in your stories.

Agree with the comment below. She's getting more drawn in and I'm looking forward to seeing where this is headed. Hoping to get to know more about the doc. Great story, more please!

Would love to read the next installment. Love how you are slowly revealing these characters to us.

Love it! Can't wait to find out what happens next, please update soon!

Hopefully?

There will be an update coming soon! Thank you for your interest!!!!!

Not as intense as the previous chapters; I suppose that we are getting used to what occurs. Viva la difference

A very well written story and mostly with very good English. I'm surprised at the misuse of the regular verb "to drag". It's simple: I drag, I dragged, I have dragged. "I drug", or variation thereof as found in a couple of places is an unpleasant surprise.

Must be an ugly american language thing, often found on Lit.

You do, nonetheless, have great writing talent. Thank you!

Supine is tummy up - sUPine. Prone is tummy down. They are antonyms. Words have exact meanings; it's very distracting when they're used incorrectly. You write so vividly, We become lost in your world. Then the appearance of a misused word or verb mis-conjugated jars us painfully out of the spell your words have woven around us. We do thank you so very much for sharing your talent with us.