by OnePenIsMightier
wow. I know you haven't submitted too many, but you must keep writing and you have to bring in another chapter of this story!!!
Hey, matter-of-fact works for me! The set-up worked and the heroine got what she had decided she wanted. Pretty real if you actually think about it. This one stands by itself and really doesn't need a Chapter 2.
Whoever said this wasn't erotic needs to find a different category to read. It was very erotic, & very honest. 5 Stars all the way!
Very good story telling and characterization along with a very erotic sex scene. I would love a sequel!
Really good story! I’d have liked more tbh, as it was it was more of erotic encounter rather a story.
Wow ! I found I was frequently holding my breath during this encounter. Very well written. Loved her thoughts & emotions. Great editing. This story could stand alone, or another chapter would be fun.
Your descriptions of her feelings before and during sex we’re wonderful ! 5-😊😊😊😊😊