All Comments on 'Breaking Out of Boring'

by OnePenIsMightier

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StubbyoneStubbyone12 months ago

Wow ! I found I was frequently holding my breath during this encounter. Very well written. Loved her thoughts & emotions. Great editing. This story could stand alone, or another chapter would be fun.

Your descriptions of her feelings before and during sex we’re wonderful ! 5-😊😊😊😊😊

PurplefizzPurplefizzabout 1 year ago

Really good story! I’d have liked more tbh, as it was it was more of erotic encounter rather a story.

tarkabukktarkabukkover 2 years ago

Ohh, I liked it, this was a good story.

Thank you for sharing,

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow

Very good story telling and characterization along with a very erotic sex scene. I would love a sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Awesome

Sequel please!!!

lord_jefelord_jefeover 6 years ago
Not erotic?!? Not true!

Whoever said this wasn't erotic needs to find a different category to read. It was very erotic, & very honest. 5 Stars all the way!

RichardVanDykeRichardVanDykeover 6 years ago

Fantastic anal only story!

HamsterHamsterover 6 years ago
Matter-of-fact

Hey, matter-of-fact works for me! The set-up worked and the heroine got what she had decided she wanted. Pretty real if you actually think about it. This one stands by itself and really doesn't need a Chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Simply NOT erotic

Just matter-of-fact.

geek_writergeek_writerover 6 years ago
keep it up!

wow. I know you haven't submitted too many, but you must keep writing and you have to bring in another chapter of this story!!!

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