All Comments on 'Breaking Point Ch. 01'

Visual, unique and compelling. Great opening.

I can not possibly wait for more!

Wow. I soooo cannot wait for ch. 2. Very well written!

Cant wait for Chapter 2

Thank you!

One heck of a start. Well thought and written. Bring it on !

Nice start and I hope it doesn't go off the rails. In my mind these two must have some previous background, either separately or together because the only fault (not really a fault but I can't think of a better word) is that Matilda accepted her Secretary smashing a priceless vase and then agreed to submit to her rather easily and quickly.

There's no sex or bdsm yet but I guess that'll come soon. Hopefully the feelings and emotions of both women will be well explored and described, characterisation plays such a big part in a good story. Anybody can write a basic sex scene, often boring and repetitive, but this story promises to be a cut above. I like to feel some empathy with the characters and have them grow in my imagination, you already have me interested and I'm eager for more. Thanks and five stars from me.