All Comments on 'Breaking The Drought'

Good story, liked the emotional buildup on the female character prior to first contact. The only physical contact they have is him nuzzling her breasts. I would have thought that she would have needed more stimulation to have reached climax so quickly. It would have made more sense if she were jilling her self off while he was sitting in the sauna. Or the guy placing her on the edge of the pool and having a early breakfast at the "Y". For the enjoyment of the guards and for the added voyeuristic possibilities of being caught by other guest or workers coming in on them. All In all a good story.

Short but effective. I liked her control of the situation and herself. Echo the previous comment on how quickly she reached climax, but within the context of a short story and her slightly aroused state going in accelerated by her bold exhibitionism at a hotel pool, it worked. 5 stars

Great story! I love the female character's confidence!