All Comments on 'Breaking The Ice'

like this much better than the last you really made me feel the different characters. Just a little mix up in the names kind of was kind of off but a goos story and like to see the hot side now with these two Thanks for writing john

This was really good. I was not even upset about the length. I gave your last story 4 stars because it was a little rushed and open ended. This one was short and sweet and deserved a 5 star rating. I wish you had written a steamy sex/love scene with this one though. I'll just make one up in my head...lol. Well done. I look forward to more of your work.

Very nice. I would honestly have liked to see a bit more of the intimacy between them since part of the story was about his change from twinks to this bear. Didn't have to be too smutty ;) just some of them getting to know each other's bodies. The last part felt a bit rushed. I think part might have been good to have him go out with David and see if the town softened their attitude with him. But overall nice story.

Would like to hear more about this couple. Also you need romance, and displays of affection in your writing. Tenderness, touch, love needs to be displayed not just spoken of.

You're the best. The name confusion was a little annoying, but I loved the story. I love all your stories!

I must be the only one who found this boring.

Really enjoyable and all the more impressive because it doesn't major on the sex but rather more on the understated but genuine emotion. Hope your future stories follow a similar line. Well done

Loved it!!

Agree with Anon about the story being even more wonderful for not spelling out the act of sex. Even in adult sites like this one, it's a fresh thing for the writer to let the emotions and the hint of there being sex happening to provoke the reader into creating the perfect sex scene in their minds. You did a good job with this.

This is the third story of yours for me to read tonight and it was fantastic!!!!! Fo Jerry to come home to David and their romance to blossom again is wonderful. You have done it yet again. This to me has been a 5 star story. I can't wait to read the next story of your that I am behind on. Keep going you are on a roll!!!!!

Loved it