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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please get an editor to turn this into English, as it is currently unreadable

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I appreciate that english is not your first language, thank you for attempt to write it in english. The more you write in english and learn the better your stories will be. Keeo writing and learning.

lustylionlustylionabout 2 years ago

Your main theme is good but English is too clumsy. So I refrained from giving stars. But notwithstanding difficulties in language, the erotic detals with the aunt is highly erotic.

JustplainjeffJustplainjeffabout 2 years ago

To d an editor who does speak your language. It will make a world of difference.

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