All Comments on 'Breaking the Rules Can Be Fun'

This is a good story. You have a good idea here and describe it pretty well. I like how she indicates she needs more "punishment" by breaking the rules. It would be even better with more editing, specifically putting quote marks (") around words actually spoken. It would make it much easier for your readers to follow your meaning. Good effort; keep writing.

I enjoyed this one -- thank you. I can echo the thoughts of the previous comment here, but I recognise good writing when I see it. Keep on writing -- it is the only way to improve. Welcome to Literotica and please have four stars from me for a good effort.

Thank's for the feedback. Did not even realize I had forgotten the quotation marks. All feedback is welcome. Thank you.