All Comments on 'Breaking the Rules Pt. 02'

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toastywarm01toastywarm01about 1 year ago

I love the way chapter two backs the story up to give the reader a history of how their life became the way it is today. And their initial meet is precious. There is no thought of punishments or anything in the BDSM world as they court each other. It naturally grows as they are together.

And the fact that the point of view has changed is refreshing. Liz is a beautiful character. I am a little bothered that I don’t know his name yet. Or did I miss it somewhere.

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